tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post3517988129112075609..comments2023-10-26T04:39:12.970-07:00Comments on GULDASTE - E - SHAYARI: Urmihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11444733179920713322noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-72976486467264214052009-07-21T18:55:23.558-07:002009-07-21T18:55:23.558-07:00हर कदम पर बहारों ने साथ छोड़ा,
ज़रूरत में दिलरूबा न...हर कदम पर बहारों ने साथ छोड़ा,<br />ज़रूरत में दिलरूबा ने भी साथ छोड़ा,<br />वादा किया था सितारों ने साथ देने का,<br />सहर हुई तो सितारों ने भी साथ छोड़ा !<br /><br />achhi rachna...<br />bahut bahut badhai...स्वप्न मञ्जूषा https://www.blogger.com/profile/06279925931800412557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-59172878103998856442009-07-11T01:52:45.050-07:002009-07-11T01:52:45.050-07:00ज़िन्दगी थी अजीब, सब एक ख्वाब थे,
खुशी तो मिली नही...ज़िन्दगी थी अजीब, सब एक ख्वाब थे,<br />खुशी तो मिली नहीं, पर गम बेहिसाब थे,<br />चाहत की क्या बात करें तुमसे,<br />था समन्दर अपना, फिर भी प्यासे थे !<br />बेहतरीन शेरvikram7https://www.blogger.com/profile/06934659997126288946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-19929284945197234072009-07-10T03:36:54.062-07:002009-07-10T03:36:54.062-07:00पता नही क्यो साथ छूटता है किसी का ..............बह...पता नही क्यो साथ छूटता है किसी का ..............बहुत ही भावपुर्ण है आपकी रचना....बधाईओम आर्यhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05608555899968867999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-53985307512086811042009-07-09T12:02:55.479-07:002009-07-09T12:02:55.479-07:00babliji
bhut umda sher .
sitare ka kam hai andere...babliji <br />bhut umda sher .<br />sitare ka kam hai andere tak sath rhna .fir to suraj ki roshni kha kisi ko tikne deti hai .शोभना चौरेhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03043712108344046108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-500246405815831932009-07-09T10:24:32.717-07:002009-07-09T10:24:32.717-07:00kya baat kahi hai aapne...... waaqai mein sab log ...kya baat kahi hai aapne...... waaqai mein sab log saath chhod dete hain........ <br /><br />Thanx for sharing mam.......<br /><br />regards.......डॉ. महफूज़ अली (Dr. Mahfooz Ali)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13152343302016007973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-12764508403215036512009-07-09T06:27:55.589-07:002009-07-09T06:27:55.589-07:00जवाब नही --
लाजवाब
chitra to aankho me bas gayeजवाब नही --<br />लाजवाब <br />chitra to aankho me bas gayeM VERMAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10122855925525653850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-7061707256706240282009-07-09T05:14:26.774-07:002009-07-09T05:14:26.774-07:00Wakae la-jbab. Dhanyawad.Wakae la-jbab. Dhanyawad.शरद कुमारhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17958271927414459178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-74230967720151649032009-07-09T04:28:41.868-07:002009-07-09T04:28:41.868-07:00अति सुन्दर रचना है...वाह!अति सुन्दर रचना है...वाह!Neeraj Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14312648658352009451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-74422652601703330432009-07-09T03:03:20.698-07:002009-07-09T03:03:20.698-07:00सुन्दर लाजवाब रचनासुन्दर लाजवाब रचनाanilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16782475492940797688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-11080147997551965792009-07-08T23:01:45.360-07:002009-07-08T23:01:45.360-07:00Chalar pathe Ek Ek Kore
Sab chole jai
Khali hoi s...Chalar pathe Ek Ek Kore <br />Sab chole jai<br />Khali hoi seat gulo<br />Tobu chalo<br />Bus ta Darun cholchhe.pradipwritenowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06321320863952722189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-30549402653779451622009-07-08T22:44:29.938-07:002009-07-08T22:44:29.938-07:00bahut sundar.............bahut sundar.............Harshvardhanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03416011520058251827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-9403566750785465692009-07-08T21:16:56.870-07:002009-07-08T21:16:56.870-07:00goodgoodRandhir Singh Sumanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18317857556673064706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-7639145089386276832009-07-08T18:14:21.491-07:002009-07-08T18:14:21.491-07:00Hi Babli
Thanks for dropping by my blog & leav...Hi Babli<br />Thanks for dropping by my blog & leaving your comments. I read your<br />Shayaris and loved them. Simple words, deep meanings, lovely verses. Really outstanding. I find most of your fans are commenting in Hindi. Hope you dont mind my comments in English !<br /><br />Have a great day. Regards<br /><br />RamUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09815960198970277771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-68383480212176006802009-07-08T11:08:17.774-07:002009-07-08T11:08:17.774-07:00हर कदम पर बहारों ने साथ छोड़ा,
ज़रूरत में दिलरूबा न...हर कदम पर बहारों ने साथ छोड़ा,<br />ज़रूरत में दिलरूबा ने भी साथ छोड़ा,<br />वादा किया था सितारों ने साथ देने का,<br />सहर हुई तो सितारों ने भी साथ छोड़ा !<br /><br />baht sundar!!!!!!Prem Farukhabadihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05791813309191821457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-70601077467036253982009-07-08T06:14:02.076-07:002009-07-08T06:14:02.076-07:00aapka likhne ka andaaz mujhe bahut pasand aaya..aapka likhne ka andaaz mujhe bahut pasand aaya..Shrutihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07572621242447318996noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-88393912323834857112009-07-08T05:55:00.676-07:002009-07-08T05:55:00.676-07:00आप की रचना पद कर पुराना हिंदी गाना याद आ गया....
द...आप की रचना पद कर पुराना हिंदी गाना याद आ गया....<br />देखी ज़माने की यारी...बिछुडे सभी बारी बारी....<br />नीरजनीरज गोस्वामीhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07783169049273015154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-86703180380659288332009-07-08T04:29:02.346-07:002009-07-08T04:29:02.346-07:00bahut hi accha sher...
meri badhai sweekar karen...bahut hi accha sher... <br /><br />meri badhai sweekar karen..<br /><br />Aabhar<br />Vijay <br />http://poemsofvijay.blogspot.com/2009/07/window-of-my-heart.htmlvijay kumar sappattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06924893340980797554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-12982441673710765432009-07-08T02:06:50.944-07:002009-07-08T02:06:50.944-07:00कम शब्दों में लाजवाब शेर।
-Zakir Ali ‘Rajnish’
{ ...कम शब्दों में लाजवाब शेर।<br /><a href="http://alizakir.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">-Zakir Ali ‘Rajnish’</a> <br /><a href="http://tasliim.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">{ Secretary-TSALIIM </a><a href="http://sciblogindia.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">& SBAI }</a>adminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09054511264112719402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-19527098492799094552009-07-07T23:18:49.648-07:002009-07-07T23:18:49.648-07:00Sahar Hui to er maane ki? Please help.Sahar Hui to er maane ki? Please help.pradipwritenowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06321320863952722189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-20869088026066980222009-07-07T11:47:13.357-07:002009-07-07T11:47:13.357-07:00...Pahle ki tarah hi khubsurat aur dilchasp.
फ़िलह......Pahle ki tarah hi khubsurat aur dilchasp.<br /><br />फ़िलहाल "शब्द-शिखर" पर आप भी बारिश के मौसम में भुट्टे का आनंद लें !!Akanksha Yadavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10606407864354423112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-68501194209071707402009-07-07T10:25:01.347-07:002009-07-07T10:25:01.347-07:00वादा किया था सितारों ने साथ देने का,
सहर हुई तो सि...वादा किया था सितारों ने साथ देने का,<br />सहर हुई तो सितारों ने भी साथ छोड़ा !<br /><br />...बेहतरीन !!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-37699677754902699362009-07-07T08:06:19.348-07:002009-07-07T08:06:19.348-07:00awesome Babli.....no words to xpress!!!!!Is baar m...awesome Babli.....no words to xpress!!!!!Is baar mein late ho gayi comment karne mein!ARUNAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00192544996428148809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-40247444474271210612009-07-07T03:45:43.892-07:002009-07-07T03:45:43.892-07:00har sher purmaani or khoobsurat
har painting apne ...har sher purmaani or khoobsurat<br />har painting apne aap se bandh rahi hai<br />speechlessनिर्झर'नीरhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16846440327325263080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-83809804422963002632009-07-07T03:30:52.785-07:002009-07-07T03:30:52.785-07:00सितारों ने भी भले ही साथ छोड़ दिया हो, निराश होने ...सितारों ने भी भले ही साथ छोड़ दिया हो, निराश होने की आवश्यकता नहीं. सूर्य है.hempandey*http://www.shakunaakhar.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-51247561857164558342009-07-07T03:14:02.800-07:002009-07-07T03:14:02.800-07:00wahh ji wahhh tussi to chha gyewahh ji wahhh tussi to chha gyeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02950211759405767205noreply@blogger.com