tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post577182300834897881..comments2023-10-26T04:39:12.970-07:00Comments on GULDASTE - E - SHAYARI: Urmihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11444733179920713322noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-37972287411751276742010-04-13T12:08:50.496-07:002010-04-13T12:08:50.496-07:00क्या बात हैं । बहुत अच्छे शेर ॥क्या बात हैं । बहुत अच्छे शेर ॥संजय भास्कर https://www.blogger.com/profile/08195795661130888170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-89783339225889959522010-03-23T04:08:09.838-07:002010-03-23T04:08:09.838-07:00लाजवाब है आपकी दास्ताने-रुसवाई ...लाजवाब है आपकी दास्ताने-रुसवाई ...दिगम्बर नासवाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11793607017463281505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-39133365835052796302010-03-22T00:07:54.215-07:002010-03-22T00:07:54.215-07:00bahut accha babli ji
apne acchi dastan likhibahut accha babli ji <br />apne acchi dastan likhiPushpendra Singh "Pushp"https://www.blogger.com/profile/14685130265985651633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-28117731975014959932010-03-21T21:32:11.339-07:002010-03-21T21:32:11.339-07:00बेहतरीन रचना..उम्दा प्रस्तुति....बधाई !!
______...बेहतरीन रचना..उम्दा प्रस्तुति....बधाई !!<br /><br /><br />__________________<br />''शब्द-सृजन की ओर" पर- गौरैया कहाँ से आयेगीKK Yadavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05702409969031147177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-23386291549765858502010-03-21T20:57:39.237-07:002010-03-21T20:57:39.237-07:00Brilliant work done :)
Regards,
DimpleBrilliant work done :)<br /><br />Regards,<br />DimpleDimplehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04616482931140406425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-10796055928005192722010-03-21T13:13:34.647-07:002010-03-21T13:13:34.647-07:00O it was fabulous....O it was fabulous....geetahttp://www.itslifeblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-8389388082388422232010-03-21T05:46:48.478-07:002010-03-21T05:46:48.478-07:00Bahut sundar. Par bahut dard tha is mein.............Bahut sundar. Par bahut dard tha is mein..............anil guptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07132892684769319063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-60601036368133092352010-03-20T19:39:33.009-07:002010-03-20T19:39:33.009-07:00सुन्दर भाव,
बेहतरीन कविता!सुन्दर भाव,<br />बेहतरीन कविता!डॉ. रूपचन्द्र शास्त्री 'मयंक'https://www.blogger.com/profile/09313147050002054907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-61156646775571779312010-03-20T13:00:55.162-07:002010-03-20T13:00:55.162-07:00waah babli ji
sadabahaar andaaz aapka fir mast k...waah babli ji<br /><br />sadabahaar andaaz aapka fir mast kar gaya <br /><br />behtareen post !Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09116344520105703759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-29216026267064403492010-03-20T10:59:04.636-07:002010-03-20T10:59:04.636-07:00बहुत सुंदर
रामराम.बहुत सुंदर<br /><br />रामराम.ताऊ रामपुरियाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12308265397988399067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-35564597464023383082010-03-20T08:48:55.511-07:002010-03-20T08:48:55.511-07:00बेहतरीन पंक्तियाँ लिखी हैं ।बेहतरीन पंक्तियाँ लिखी हैं ।डॉ टी एस दरालhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16674553361981740487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-18307035856907717652010-03-20T08:17:58.064-07:002010-03-20T08:17:58.064-07:00वाह! बेहतरीन!वाह! बेहतरीन!Udan Tashtarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06057252073193171933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-51955696734511866272010-03-20T08:03:17.536-07:002010-03-20T08:03:17.536-07:00wah ji wah...
mazaa aa gaya...wah ji wah...<br /><br />mazaa aa gaya...सुरेन्द्र "मुल्हिद"https://www.blogger.com/profile/00509168515861229579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-45915083233778646152010-03-20T07:58:11.966-07:002010-03-20T07:58:11.966-07:00Beautiful Babli. Really good.Beautiful Babli. Really good.chitrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11162975193030085486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-3962167129142337612010-03-20T07:43:08.447-07:002010-03-20T07:43:08.447-07:00ख़्वाब जो था पर अब न होगा आशियाँ,
लिख दी है हमनें र...ख़्वाब जो था पर अब न होगा आशियाँ,<br />लिख दी है हमनें रुसवाई की दास्तान !<br />लाजवाब मगर ऐसा कर दें तो ?<br />लिख दी है हमनें दास्ताने रुसवाईयांArvind Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02231261732951391013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-22143753849807643022010-03-20T07:34:12.306-07:002010-03-20T07:34:12.306-07:00शेर और चित्र दोनों से आपने एक दास्ता लिख दीशेर और चित्र दोनों से आपने एक दास्ता लिख दीM VERMAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10122855925525653850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-80739270591351150352010-03-20T07:31:19.869-07:002010-03-20T07:31:19.869-07:00सुन्दर!सुन्दर!डॉ. मनोज मिश्रhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07989374080125146202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-32263927473208126742010-03-20T07:21:29.317-07:002010-03-20T07:21:29.317-07:00bahut khoobsurat ...really touching one...dearbahut khoobsurat ...really touching one...dearअलीम आज़मीhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15152383412965088352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-52563865609889373512010-03-20T06:41:52.859-07:002010-03-20T06:41:52.859-07:00I am impressed.Very nice.Keep up the good work.I am impressed.Very nice.Keep up the good work.BK Chowla,https://www.blogger.com/profile/03869011550287421537noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-58190874710720222072010-03-20T05:58:02.643-07:002010-03-20T05:58:02.643-07:00बहुत अच्छी कविता।बहुत अच्छी कविता।मनोज कुमारhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08566976083330111264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-64070681306051157862010-03-20T05:04:26.314-07:002010-03-20T05:04:26.314-07:00आप खाना तो बहुत अच्छा खिलाती है ओर फ़िर ऎसी गजले पढ...आप खाना तो बहुत अच्छा खिलाती है ओर फ़िर ऎसी गजले पढवा कर दिल को उदास कर देती है,बहुत सुंदर लगी आप की यह रुसवाई की दास्तां.... अगली बार कोई खुशियो से भरी, उम्मीद जागाती गजल हो जायेराज भाटिय़ाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10550068457332160511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-23940430507737174202010-03-20T04:54:52.912-07:002010-03-20T04:54:52.912-07:00इतनी कम पंक्तियों में एक लम्बी दास्ताँ वाह वाह !!!...इतनी कम पंक्तियों में एक लम्बी दास्ताँ वाह वाह !!!!रचना दीक्षितhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10298077073448653913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-30091660565179019262010-03-20T04:37:27.662-07:002010-03-20T04:37:27.662-07:00बहुत खूबसूरत .....पंक्तियाँबहुत खूबसूरत .....पंक्तियाँDevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05009376638678868909noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-1610781906394003882010-03-20T02:35:21.449-07:002010-03-20T02:35:21.449-07:00very beautifully written :)very beautifully written :)Umesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17151950571137902007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3093504710658326741.post-82264370566442647932010-03-20T02:00:47.320-07:002010-03-20T02:00:47.320-07:00क्या बात हैं । बहुत अच्छे शेर ॥क्या बात हैं । बहुत अच्छे शेर ॥dipayanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07385176375960362837noreply@blogger.com