Sunday, September 20, 2009


तुमसे कोई शिकवा है और कोई गम,
सिर्फ़ मेरा चेहरा देखा पर दिल नहीं देखा सनम,
याद हर पल आयेगी वो साथ गुज़रे मीठे पल,
जब जब सोचूंगी तुम्हें, आंखों से आंसू आयेंगे निकल !

55 comments:

Mithilesh dubey said...

वाह क्या बात है, बहुत खुब। न पता क्यों साथ बिताये हुए पल हमें याद आते है। सुन्दर रचना....

Mishra Pankaj said...

चार ही लाइन पर कमाल की लिखती है आप सुन्दर अनुभव

Anonymous said...

dil rota hai
aankhen bayan karti hai,
kash tum saath hote
na koi shikayat hoti na koi gam

डॉ. रूपचन्द्र शास्त्री 'मयंक' said...

बहुत सुन्दर शेर पेश किया है आपने।
सीधे-सीधे भावनाओं पर चोट करता है।

Mumukshh Ki Rachanain said...

न तुमसे कोई शिकवा है और न कोई गम,
याद हर पल वो साथ गुज़रे मीठे से जो पल,

सुन्दर लाजवाब
भले मन की संस्कारित दास्तान.

चन्द्र मोहन गुप्त
जयपुर

Chandan Kumar Jha said...

बहुत सुन्दर बबली जी । आभार ।

विनोद कुमार पांडेय said...

बहुत खुब!!!

संजय भास्‍कर said...

चार ही लाइन पर कमाल की लिखती है
सुन्दर रचना....


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डॉ टी एस दराल said...

वाह, पढ़कर हम भी भूतकाल में गोते खाने लगे. सुन्दर पंक्तियाँ.

M VERMA said...

बहुत सुन्दर रचना
चित्र तो हमेशा की तरह लाजवाब

SACCHAI said...

" kya baat hai ....bahut khub ....ye yaadein beshumar kimati hai ise sambhal ke rakhana '

----- eksacchai { AAWAZ }

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mark rai said...

याद हर पल आयेगी वो साथ गुज़रे मीठे पल,
जब जब सोचूंगी तुम्हें, आंखों से आंसू आयेंगे निकल.....koi kahe n kahe aapki abhivakti me ek ajeeb sa dard hota hai.....

दिल दुखता है... said...

न तुमसे कोई शिकवा है और न कोई गम,
सिर्फ़ मेरा चेहरा देखा पर दिल नहीं देखा सनम,
दिल कहा कोई देख रहा है आज कल..............

मोहन वशिष्‍ठ said...

न तुमसे कोई शिकवा है और न कोई गम,
सिर्फ़ मेरा चेहरा देखा पर दिल नहीं देखा सनम,
याद हर पल आयेगी वो साथ गुज़रे मीठे पल,
जब जब सोचूंगी तुम्हें, आंखों से आंसू आयेंगे निकल

बेहतरीन उर्मी जी काबिलेतारीफ

BK Chowla, said...

I can not reply to you in poetic lines.But,what you have written is heart touching.

yogi said...

waah waah!!!!
too gud..

Sumandebray said...

Duniya wale aNsoo to uNhi nikal dete hai ....
agar jazbaat hogi to "unke aNkein hoge namN"

Bahut Khub ... bahut khub

ओम आर्य said...

hamesha ki tarah behad khubsoorat bhaw.............

डिम्पल मल्होत्रा said...

achhi rachna...

Dimple said...

Hello Babli,

Nice creation...

Regards,
Dimple
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Neeraj Kumar said...

पता नहीं क्या-क्या मिस कर दिया मैंने...इन १५ दिनों में...
धीरे-धीरे पढना पड़ेगा सबकी रचनाएँ...

अच्छा लिखा है आपने...

not feeling well...

kshama said...

Guldaste kee khoobsooratee, din doonee raat chaugunee badh rahee hai....kamaal hai!

डा0 हेमंत कुमार ♠ Dr Hemant Kumar said...

याद हर पल आयेगी वो साथ गुज़रे मीठे पल,
जब जब सोचूंगी तुम्हें, आंखों से आंसू आयेंगे निकल

बहुत उम्दा भाव अच्छी अभिव्यक्ति के साथ्।
आपको ईद और नवरात्र दोनों की मंगलकामनायें।
हेमन्त कुमार

सुरेन्द्र "मुल्हिद" said...

bas bas babli ji...
itni gehrai waali bat keh di aapne..
wah...

abdul hai said...

bahut khoob

Abhilash said...

again nice photo babli...

jabardast kavita

Apanatva said...

bahut hee acchee bhavo kee abhivyakti .

janta ki aawaz said...

wah babli ji kya baat kahi hai aap ne kaash aap jaisa zehen mere paas bhi hota to tanhaiyon ko yuo kavita me dhaal lete ......

निर्मला कपिला said...

वाह बबली जी बहुत सुन्दर है ये यादें ऐसी ही होती हैं

Udan Tashtari said...

उम्दा भाव, बधाई.

प्रकाश पाखी said...

न तुमसे कोई शिकवा है और न कोई गम,
याद हर पल वो साथ गुज़रे मीठे से जो पल,
बहुत सुंदर!

Naveen Tyagi said...

ati sundar rachna.

मुकेश कुमार तिवारी said...

उर्मी जी,

भाव भरा एक अच्छा मुक्तक!!!

सादर,

मुकेश कुमार तिवारी

admin said...

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to aansu nahee moti hain
dil ke gam ko bhulatee
dukhon ko dhotee hai
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aankhen kyon rotee hain

Rakesh Singh - राकेश सिंह said...

सुन्दर !

शेर के साथ फोटो का चुनाव लाजवाब रहता है |

BrijmohanShrivastava said...

अच्छी कविता

shivraj gujar said...

बहुत ही उम्दा. एक दम दिल के करीब. साथ में लगाये फोटो ने रचना में छुपे दर्द को बहुत ही शिद्दत से उभारा है.
मेरे ब्लॉग (meridayari.blogspot.com) पर भी आयें

cartoonist anurag said...

बबली जी........
बहुत ही सुंदर रचना है.......
आपको ढेर सारी बधाई .........

मनोज भारती said...

दुनिया चेहरा देखती है सिर्फ क्योंकि
दुनिया का कोई चेहरा ही नहीं होता
और दिल जो पल-पल जीता है
नहीं रखता कोई गिला और शिकवा
यह तो मन है जो सोचता है और यादों पर
आंसू बहाता है

बेहतरीन पंक्तियाँ !!! आज आपके ब्लॉग पर पहली बार आया और अभिभूत हो गया । आपके मुक्तक से सजी-संवरी सुंदर तस्वीरों का चयन देख कर भी मन हर्षित हो उठा ।

धन्यवाद

The Literary Jewels said...

A very touching poem...indeed.

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